Hopelessly Lost

I have seen some who appear lost in a maze
with only a crust of bread in their pockets
as they turn from dead end to dead end 
unable to see over the high thick hedges 
and only later did I learn 
they weren't lost at all.

They were making maps.

Luvgood Carp, Editor-in-Chief
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  1. Liz H-H's avatar Liz H says:
    July 13, 2022 at 6:01 pm

    I really love this.

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    1. luvgoodcarp's avatar luvgoodcarp says:
      July 13, 2022 at 7:15 pm

      Thanks, Liz.

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  2. Geoff Stamper's avatar Geoff Stamper says:
    July 14, 2022 at 4:12 am

    Yes, a very satisfying read.

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    1. luvgoodcarp's avatar luvgoodcarp says:
      July 14, 2022 at 5:50 am

      Thanks, Geoff.

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  3. Bartholomew Barker's avatar Bartholomew Barker says:
    July 17, 2022 at 9:01 am

    Brilliant metaphor!

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    1. luvgoodcarp's avatar luvgoodcarp says:
      July 17, 2022 at 11:14 am

      Thanks very much, Bartholomew.

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