Neptune Returns Home

Lord, could it be I'm not as great
as they've been telling me?
I was told at an early age
that I'm better than the rest.
I have trophies that prove it true,
but now in every contest
I'm beaten by more than a few.
For years I splashed in a tub
pretending to rule the wine-dark sea,
but when I go to Dad's club
no one confuses Neptune with me.
Now here I am back in my old room
(having finished my education)
with an hourly job and minimal pay
and these trophies say participation.
Lord, club-footed Byron couldn't dance
but you gave him eloquence and artistry,
and now he's the avatar of romance.
So, Lord, what gifts do you have for me?

Luvgood Carp, Editor-in-Chief

11 Comments

  1. jsimpsonpoet's avatar jsimpsonpoet says:

    Very cool!!

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    1. Liz H-H's avatar Liz H-H says:

      Good things come to those who keep pluggin’ along. You’re in a buffer zone, while the Great Whomever runs a few calculations for the many possible scenarios out there for you. 🐛🦋

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      1. luvgoodcarp's avatar luvgoodcarp says:

        Haha. Okay, I’ll go with that.

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      2. Liz H-H's avatar Liz H-H says:

        👍 Just keep swimming, swimming, swimming…

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  2. JosieHolford's avatar JosieHolford says:

    Dear Child of Destiny (Self-Proclaimed),

    Dear Child of Destiny (Self-Proclaimed),

    The gods must chuckle at your plight—
    A legend in your own mind’s night.
    Your trophies gleam with hollow pride,
    Yet fate won’t grant you a fare-free ride.

    All that praise was just but lies

    “Good job!” and all those empty cries

    Now you learn – too late by years-

    The real world is a vale of tears.

    Fear not, for life is long, they say—
    Perhaps you’ll shine another way!
    But if the world still fails to see,
    Just get an MFA degree.

    (at Pungent Sound of course.)

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    1. luvgoodcarp's avatar luvgoodcarp says:

      Well done, Josie. That’s brilliant.

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  3. You have a gift for poetry but liberal arts do not pay very well.

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    1. luvgoodcarp's avatar luvgoodcarp says:

      Haha. Yes, that’s why I went to law school. But thank you for the compliment, that’s kind of you.

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  4. gwengrant's avatar gwengrant says:

    Had another joyful read whilst I was here.

    Gwen.

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    1. luvgoodcarp's avatar luvgoodcarp says:

      Excellent. Thanks, Gwen.

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